Super short update

I am still working on Malena. I wrote two new scenes, and re-worked the way the ending works, hopefully making it slightly more interesting. I believe the writing for the scenes is good enough, so no problems on that front, but I wonder if I should have something more interactive for the mechanics. On one hand, you are supposed to be a slave, so interactivity always seems a bit weird. On the other hand, the game has to be fun to play as well, so there must be some agency for the players to express. We'll see if I can come up with something that satisfies me. I have probably 2-3 more scenes to write, and then I should have covered the entire enslaved ending, so that I can move on to write one final scene if you keep a more "balanced" relationship with Malena. Then I'll toss a coin, and see if I will tackle Jane or Piper next. :P

Anyway, this should be it for this week, again, nothing too exciting, just standard progress made in the name of all things TOTDC. Until next week! ^_^